olivia
2/4/2015 04:47:19 pm
I thank Benjamin franklin because he made electricity. I think electricity is important because when we want to look at something in dark we cannot look at the thing. Also if we did not have electricity we cannot ever play games in the phone. Phone is made up of electricity. When the electricity was not there we never have a chance to do online journal, talk with far away people, cannot chat, can not watch youtube, cannot turn one the air conditioner when we are hot, we cannot shower, we cannot cook food, cars cannot move, and the radio too. I have a story of a electricity. One day a girl went to school. they even have any electricity. So they did not have a chance to study with the computer. So do not waste the electricity.
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DaViD
2/4/2015 08:31:00 pm
I think famous inventors and discoverers were successful because the inventions worked and discoveries were discovered!!!! The good thing is they never gave up like Thomas Edison. The light bulb didn't work even though he tried about one thousand times!!!! After those many many tries it worked it really worked. He didn't stop I think he tried more times to make the light bulb last longer. So, he kept on trying then I think it lasted very long!!! He also made more inventions and discoveries. More than a thousand of them. Alexander Graham Bell's invention the telephone was famous because he brought it to the world fair. Then, a Brazilian king or emperor was passing by and tried his invention. He was able to talk to people that was not there. He called all the people's attention and told them about that invention. When I grow up I would want to build a trash can that monkeys can't knock it down. I would try to go to a grown up science fair at first. If I am in first place I would go to a place that is more advanced. If I win I would go to the world fair. If I win My invention will be known that it is very good. People will be amazed and some will laugh a lot. If some fans liked it so much I would make them one. This is one of my mom and my idea mixed. This is a invention that I really really want to make when I grow up. Another invention is a machine that can make,fix,get, and show anything I want. It can fly 9 everything else nine decillion(thirty-five nines!) miles per 0.00000000000000001 second. You won't be able to see it and if you ride it your ears will pop!!! It will be awesome to make my invention.
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Blah Blah
2/4/2015 08:32:38 pm
It's sooooooooooooooooooo long!!!!!!!
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David
2/4/2015 08:40:27 pm
Not decillion but undecillion.
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olivia
2/6/2015 11:08:32 am
david your online journal is super cool. I think your journal has no mistakes
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2/4/2015 08:44:38 pm
I think Thomas Edison was a famous inventor that invented a light bulb. When Thomas Edison was young he had a lot of question the question was almost all about "how does this work?". He even made a fire in the whole town. He was celling candies and the newspapers in the train. What he invented when he was grown up were gramophone and a tube so he opened a way of a radio. My mom loves a radio so she is thanked to Thomas Edison.
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Christian
2/5/2015 03:45:24 pm
Inventors succeed by thinking hard, getting help from mentors, and being inspired. One example is Benjamin Franklin, who discovered electricity. Benjamin Franklin helped people by bringing electricity to the world. I can be successful with my invention by thinking hard and by inspiring others and by using mentors. I will be successful if I test my inventions until they are perfect.
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Joey Kim
2/6/2015 05:42:28 pm
The difference of ordinary people and inventors or discoverers are ordinary people just pass when
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Joaquin
2/6/2015 08:29:34 pm
I think famous inventors were successful because they worked very hard and they got help from mentors. I think famous inventors were successful because they thought hard and they did experiments. They did experiments so they would know if it worked or if it didn't work. If the invention didn't work then inventors could make the invention better. I think famous discoverers were successful because even if they could not find stuff they kept on trying. I can improve my invention by working hard and testing it until it will work.
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Won ji
2/6/2015 08:32:02 pm
I think famous inventors and discoverer were successful because they wanted to make the world a better place. They invented new thing that
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I think famous inventors are successful because they do a lot of experiments and do hard work.Also some inventors like Alexander graham bell got help from Thomas Augustus Watson also a lot of inventors try but fail but some success inventors make some inventions for fun also for learning and most of all they make it to make life easier for people also I think inventing is hard work because you have to think have ideas and you have to make a model of it.I think to improvenmy invention I have to test it and if it doesn't work I have to make another one.also inventing is hard but it is cool and we have som fun stuff.
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Luke Skywalker the jedi!
2/7/2015 02:12:56 pm
I think famose inventors and discoverers succed on their discoveries and inventions because they study about the invention and the discovery really hard. I think they also succed because they make the invention really carefully. I also think they succed because they are really smart and if they have a partner the, partner is also smart. I can improve my chances of succeding by: 1. makeing my invention better and better 2. study hard 3. explain my invention really well. Those are my theories about how they succed and how I can improve my invention.
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Shiny Lee
2/8/2015 07:08:36 pm
I think Alexander Grahambell was a successful inventor because if we don't have phones we cannot call any people. He was a inventor because he made which was not made yet. There are good and bad things about inventing telephones. The bad thing is that we could just travel to communicate. The good thing is that we can talk to people who are far like Philippines to Russia. I like him. I would copy him to be an awesome inventor when I grow up.
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